Grumble

Commentary:

The dialogue balloons are out of order in panel 2. Dialogue balloons can be hard sometimes, especially as they are added after the rest of the drawing is done, so if I don’t leave enough room for them they end up looking cramped. I could have done panel 2 more like panel 4, but because they are already kind of pushed to one side of the panel Blue’s dialogue would end up floating between her and Green, and it generally looks bad to interrupt the characters’ line of sight like that.