Commentary:

Here are some of Cyan’s more literal word balloons. That second one is just a copy and paste of the rest of the panel.

I forgot to mention that a few pages before was the first time Red’s monobrow leaves his head. Here in the beginning I am using it to show surprise, but for whatever reason this sort of becomes its default position in a while. Sometimes I will remind myself that no, his eyebrow should be attached to his face, so I draw it like actually on his body.