Commentary: I really like that Red in the first panel. Running so excitedly his feet aren’t touching the ground. Here Red and Blue use their best imitations to show Green how they think the fight will go. Green remains unconvinced.
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Commentary: Word coming out of mouths. When they open their mouths really wide their heads tend to shrink to make room for more openness. Green is trying to explain why he does not want to get into a fight, but[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Commentary: These next 10 pages all have the same name, but the actual continuing storyline goes on past them for a few pages. I just thought that 10 was a nice round number. Red here, used to being friends with[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Commentary: The table here is pretty much just to set up a place for the other characters to watch the fight coming up. Magenta is trying to be a little classier, so a nice shaded table to eat at is[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Commentary: Here’s Yellow being obsessive. He does not yet feel that the ice cream incident has been repaid. He has to follow around Green feeling angry, waiting for an actual confrontation. Green knows that as long as he’s with Blue[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Commentary: You get one sentence per word balloon. If you have two sentences you have to connect them with a little thing. Of course, if you have really long run on sentences like the ones in the top panels then[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Commentary: Red is concerned about the machine he saw in the factory. He doesn’t know what it does, but he knows there is something about it it that is bad. That angled conveyor belt is important, see. They still don’t[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Commentary: The word balloon has a jagged tail because it is coming out of a telephone. I don’t know if I have kept that consistent. He has a rotary phone because that is the appropriate kind of phone for these[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Commentary: This one doesn’t have any panel borders because it’s supposed to be all dreamy or something. Just experimenting with some coloring. Green is tall, so he actually fits into his bed like a normal person, mostly. The other people[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Commentary: Turning into a ball is a skill Red can teach. It’s easy for Blue to learn, though, because she started out already ball-shaped. It would be much harder for Yellow to learn how to do this, though it is[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…